2018-05-01, 18:11 | Link #1283 |
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Issei takes Asia's virginity and Rassei gets mad taking on Issei and Issei annihilates him and has the Grigori make a new Sacred Gear using his soul.
Asia is bent on revenge against Issei and raises a dragon army to defeat Issei to avenge Rassei. She recruits the Dragon Kings, Crom Cruach, and Great Red successfully taking them. And a whole bunch of other dragons. She starts a war against the world using her massive dragon army. She's already pregnant with Issei's child before she turns against him and gives birth to the child and lies to the child saying that Issei raped her and thus is the child's father. The child is raised to become the next Dragon god and defeat his/her father Issei. That would make a good fanfic if someone hasn't come up with that one already. |
2018-05-01, 18:15 | Link #1284 | |
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Like, how would anyone read this without dousing themselves in black eyeliner and blasting Linkin Park through fifty speakers?
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2018-05-01, 23:02 | Link #1287 |
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I could make a fanfic right now and It'll be better than 90% of them I bet. Just write it and then adjust it by taking out the flaws.
Flaws of fanfic: 1. Bad grammar- If you're going to write a fanfic and post it online for others to read, at least know how to spell and use proper grammar(seeing that consistently is an instant turn-off.) 2. Self-insert characters- People tend to want to create a new character based on themselves. And then create this perfect version of themselves where they have no flaws and half the story is about 'how they're so perfect at everything.' If you're going to make your character very good or talented at something, don't put much detail into it. Don't make them able to seduce every girl with just a quick glance, don't make them the master of thousands of magic, don't make them physical gods, etc. Because they tend to focus on these perfect traits so much and the story is really about their character being perfect in everything and having no flaws. Make it a little realistic. Most people aren't masters in those kinds of things. 3. Out-of-character- What's even worse than that is using an existing character that already has a certain personality and self-inserting yourself into that character's spot. Then have them do things that go against their character. Or make them perfect in everything. 4. Making the story kind of bland. The guy who wrote CrossxCrisis is guilty of this. Yes. CrossxCrisis was a fanfiction that Ishibumi saw and like and decided to make part of DxD. |
2018-05-02, 00:23 | Link #1288 | |
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Your fanfic idea is based on Ise murdering Asia's pet and her swearing eternal vengeance on him for it. The other three would depend on how you write it, but you've already punched number three so hard it shattered.
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2018-05-02, 16:43 | Link #1292 |
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Issei is killed by the invaders of the ExE world and Asia swears to avenge him by raising a Dragon army. With Crom Cruach and the Dragon Kings at the forefront. She even tames Great Red and invades their world and razes it to the ground.
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2018-06-05, 22:44 | Link #1296 |
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So is it just me or does anyone else want to see an illustration of Sona with long hair? Since she is now acting as Levia-tan she grew her hair out. So I wonder how good Sona looks with it. Saji was probably dying of blood loss when he saw her.
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