(L) Mushoku Tensei -Isekai Ittara Honki Dasu- [WN]

[iceaco]

Originally Posted by Ahou

oh.. I thought most of them were done and that the only ones that needed editing were the newer ones

editing is something that never ends. If you are new to reading it you'll find something that doesn't sit well with you that other editors not care. And every editor edits differently.

For example, I don't change names or sentence structure. I only fix spelling, grammar, and missing words. I leave the rest to other editors. If there's anything I edit wrongly, I rely on other editors to fix my mistakes too.

Tl;dr yes all chapters can use editing

[Ahou]

Originally Posted by iceaco

editing is something that never ends. If you are new to reading it you'll find something that doesn't sit well with you that other editors not care. And every editor edits differently.

For example, I don't change names or sentence structure. I only fix spelling, grammar, and missing words. I leave the rest to other editors. If there's anything I edit wrongly, I rely on other editors to fix my mistakes too.

Tl;dr yes all chapters can use editing

Hmm... I see... well in an attempt to avoid editing vol 18 and 19, I shall worship the first goddess by going through her arc again ;D

[ReaperxKingx]

I got to say, reading the first part of that Diary really made me feel sad in the inside. One of rarest moments I gotten from reading a light novel.....

[Kaito Yamakage]

Originally Posted by ReaperxKingx

I got to say, reading the first part of that Diary really made me feel sad in the inside. One of rarest moments I gotten from reading a light novel.....

If you get the full impression from those parts including the build up starting in volume 15 @Turning Point 4 it's several times over.

Turning Point 3/Volume 13 was one of the most important volumes for development but Turning Point4/volume 15-16 hit me the hardest.

[ReaperxKingx]

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

If you get the full impression from those parts including the build up starting in volume 15 @Turning Point 4 it's several times over.

Turning Point 3/Volume 13 was one of the most important volumes for development but Turning Point4/volume 15-16 hit me the hardest.

*Sigh* I guess this called a dual side sword I guess for being a reader. When reading, you got so immense in it that you feel that you are the main character or a silent invisible observer that when they are face with extreme emotions so do you.

Triumphs, sadness, guilt, humility, .... and so on....

[Skuizaan]

I wept manly tears at a certain chapter in v13. That chapter sealed this series as an actual Epic for me. Because I feel that equalized a lot of things, and proved beyond a shadow of a doubt, even with all of the Laplace factor Rudeus has, he is still Mortal.

[ReaperxKingx]

^
Yeah, but I do hope that the other volumes before that gets translated. The saying goes "jump into the fray to soon, you'll get burn". I would like to see Rudeus's progress before hitting the cake. Otherwise the impact of the most important volumes will be somewhat anti-climatic.

[Ahou]

Yup, vol 13 made me sad =/

And vol 16 made me cringe.

Those 2 vols imo were the best emotionally. One showed you a glimpse of what would actually happen when you lose a family member. And even though its in a world with magic and time travel, there is surprisingly no resurrection; and I say good. None of that "-insert person- comes back alive by some unexplained bs and everyone is happy again crap".

And also vol 16 was basically like a bad end from a visual novel. And now it feels like you are going back to replay the game and trying to get to the true end ;D

[Dormouse]

Originally Posted by Ahou

Yup, vol 13 made me sad =/

And vol 16 made me cringe.

Those 2 vols imo were the best emotionally. One showed you a glimpse of what would actually happen when you lose a family member. And even though its in a world with magic and time travel, there is surprisingly no resurrection; and I say good. None of that "-insert person- comes back alive by some unexplained bs and everyone is happy again crap".

And also vol 16 was basically like a bad end from a visual novel. And now it feels like you are going back to replay the game and trying to get to the true end ;D

Oh man. Don't tell me that he spends volume 17 collecting magical fairy light balls or some shit... -hasn't read past volume 12-

[Kaito Yamakage]

Originally Posted by Dormouse

Oh man. Don't tell me that he spends volume 17 collecting magical fairy light balls or some shit... -hasn't read past volume 12-

He spends volume 17 collecting magical fairy light balls. MADE OF CHEESE.

[Dormouse]

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

He spends volume 17 collecting magical fairy light balls. MADE OF CHEESE.

fuark, taking it one step further than key did

sasoogar backscratcher

incidentally I just read about the encounter with the succubus you mentioned, lol. lucky he didn't choose to go begaritt himself.

[Gubbi]

Spoiler for Question about Diary part:

Sylphy. and Roxy.

Two people are still alive.

It did not become like n that diary.

I absolutely evade it.

He mentions he has just started reading the diary but things are different. How do things are different when he just started reading diary and did nothing about it yet?

[Ahou]

Originally Posted by Dormouse

fuark, taking it one step further than key did

sasoogar backscratcher

incidentally I just read about the encounter with the succubus you mentioned, lol. lucky he didn't choose to go begaritt himself.

YO MANG!!! CHEESE BALLS BE DELICIOUS!!! LOLOLOL

@Gubbi

Spoiler for spoiler for diary:

long story short the diary said Roxy will die after she gets bitten by a rat that carries a disease (that turns you into stone) in which Rudy goes into a state of depression. Sylphy tries to comfort him but in the end she leaves him and decides to help Ariel. This causes her to die in the process

[Kaito Yamakage]

[SPOILER="???"]Dumbledore dies!!![SPOILER]


Indeed it's good he didn't go alone... I was debating whether to include that chapter on the ones I translate in volume 12 when I get there... because it's funny.

Otherwise I was only planning to do 1-2 and 8. While many chapters in 12 are good, those are the only super necessary ones to volume 13.

[Ahou]

Originally Posted by kaito yamakage

[spoiler="???"]dumbledore dies!!![spoiler]


indeed it's good he didn't go alone... I was debating whether to include that chapter on the ones i translate in volume 12 when i get there... Because it's funny.

Otherwise i was only planning to do 1-2 and 8. While many chapters in 12 are good, those are the only super necessary ones to volume 13.

FAIL SPOILER!! qq WAI U RUIN MY CHILDHOOD!! :<

[Dormouse]

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

[SPOILER="???"]Dumbledore dies!!![SPOILER]


Indeed it's good he didn't go alone... I was debating whether to include that chapter on the ones I translate in volume 12 when I get there... because it's funny.

Otherwise I was only planning to do 1-2 and 8. While many chapters in 12 are good, those are the only super necessary ones to volume 13.

Just finished reading 114. Seems I can finish both Eris SS and reading vol 12 tonight. Fresh start for Monday, hoho.

Originally Posted by Kaito Yamakage

Prepare to marathon 13. Lol.

Glad you've got those side stories covered... I might end up doing that one Zanoba one, not sure yet...sometime in-between the 40 chapters I have planned/non-registered.

Eris is cute, so I'm happily doing them.

Still, I can't believe how much faster it is to read without translating. Just a little tempted to read until vol 19, but if I do that I'll probably never translate a chapter again lol.

[Kaito Yamakage]

Originally Posted by Dormouse

Just finished reading 114. Seems I can finish both Eris SS and reading vol 12 tonight. Fresh start for Monday, hoho.

Prepare to marathon 13. Lol.


Glad you've got those side stories covered... I might end up doing that one Zanoba one, not sure yet...sometime in-between the 40 chapters I have planned/non-registered.

[Gubbi]

Originally Posted by Ahou

YO MANG!!! CHEESE BALLS BE DELICIOUS!!! LOLOLOL

@Gubbi

Spoiler for spoiler for diary:

long story short the diary said Roxy will die after she gets bitten by a rat that carries a disease (that turns you into stone) in which Rudy goes into a state of depression. Sylphy tries to comfort him but in the end she leaves him and decides to help Ariel. This causes her to die in the process

Spoiler for Diary:

It did not become like n that diary.

I absolutely evade it.

Is it like - It should not become, I must evade it?

[myopius]

Originally Posted by Xacual

Last I checked he said he had 5 chapters already done for the next volume. He just chooses to release them all together.

Ah, that makes sense.

Originally Posted by Kioras

His blog, he posted on 7-29, that he was 5 chapters in.

I had no clue about that, thanks for the heads up. Actually, I just checked the blog and he said that since volume 20's going to be longer/more serious than usual and July/August are busy, he's going to take a 1-2 month break instead of a 1 month break this time... That's according to his July 15 entry. Too bad.

On 7-22 he had 1 chapter done. 20 should be done around 8-5 I think, if there is no writers block.

I noticed that in the July 22 entry he estimated there'd be 11-12 chapters in volume 20. Keeping at 1.75 days per chapter for the remaining 7 chapters after July 29, that's about 12 days--August 10. Well, that's probably going to be wrong since he said he'd take more than a month this time (i.e. sometime after August 13).

[kazzuya]

Spoiler for Diary Part 2:

If I remember it correctly first of because of Roxy and Sylphy death. Rudeus has become a lilicon and flat chest seeker even turning his eyes on Juli(The dwarven slave of Zanoba). And I think that everyone left him alone and the only one who stayed by his side Aisha. However Aisha died because of Fire or explosion. Zanoba also died as well. While on a journey for revenge against Hitogami. He frequently bout with Eris thinking that Eris wants to kill him. In the end when he was ambush Eris came to his rescue and died while protecting him. And finally realized and Eris still loves him. And searched for a way to finally fight Hitogami in the void word however he became too old and weak so he went back in time and that's it. By the way he is buried next to Paul.