2008-10-23, 07:22 | Link #121 | |
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I just posted a new fic on FFN, a compilation of the reformed!Neena idea with a new update. The story isn't showing yet, but I'll link when it does. Edit: Link to the new story. Last edited by Dean_the_Young; 2008-10-23 at 08:28. |
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2008-10-23, 09:35 | Link #122 |
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Setsuna/Feldt people.
You know it!! THAT IS THE BEST COMBINATION EVA!! Or Tieria/Setsuna. I still can't figure out whether Tieria is a guy or girl. Did they confirm whether he/she is a guy or girl, already?
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2008-10-23, 10:17 | Link #123 | |
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As for Setsuna? Please, be a bit more imaginative. |
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2008-10-23, 13:46 | Link #125 | |
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As for the drabble with Setsuna and Ali....I guess its reasonable but this only raises questions about Ali. For example why did he stop the KPSA'S activities, ect. |
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2008-10-23, 15:05 | Link #126 | ||
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Granted, I took some liberties, such even making her acceptable to sudden maturity in the first place, but the end idea is that Neena knows she screwed up in a way that may have resulted in the loss of her brothers' lives, she regrets her own impulsive actions (Saji being the living consequence of her deeds), and she wants to be a better person, like Setsuna, who is trying to be Gundam. Or, shorter, Neena wants to be like Setsuna, and so wants to be Gundam by proxy. Quote:
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2008-10-23, 15:47 | Link #127 |
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Made it as a prequel to my other fic, Attack Wave. Next up: A decent Setsuna/Christina A Setsuna/Sumeragi from here A dark Saji/Kinue. Not sure on how to work this out.
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2008-10-23, 16:59 | Link #130 | |
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But if you want a change, why not reverse it? Saji dies due to Celestial Being, and Kinue is the one left grieving? It could be back at the League Tower, or because of the terrorist attacks, or you could spin your own reason. Did Setsuna get exposed, and Saji become a bystander? Perhaps instead of attacking a wedding in Spain, Neena Trinity attacks a small school gathering in the Japanese country side, where one boy is admitting his intended proposal? You can do it, it still stay perfectly platonic. |
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2008-10-23, 18:24 | Link #132 | |
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Anyway, just because I am curious, why would you have to stay platonic when writing a Saji/Kinue? |
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2008-10-23, 18:38 | Link #133 | |
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Do you need a reason beyond that? I could explain how inbreeding is a proven cause of genetic disorders and defects from hemophelia to clubbed foots and other birth defects. |
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2008-10-23, 19:05 | Link #135 | |
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I guess my question was: what is wrong writing about it? Of course I know the genetic implications and immoral ones of incest in the real world but should you really need to be so cautious in fiction? |
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2008-10-23, 19:18 | Link #136 |
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Yes. Slippery slopes to sin, and all that. Those who regularly indulge in imaginary fantasies of illegal or immoral actions in private are much more likely to perform them in real life as they mentally desensitize themselves to the acts.
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2008-10-23, 21:28 | Link #139 | |
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And, of course, some times you just get a burst. I put a good hour, two hours into a long-stalled project last night. Did pretty well, too. Last edited by Dean_the_Young; 2008-10-23 at 21:39. |
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2008-10-23, 21:42 | Link #140 | |
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