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Old 2007-11-17, 06:39   Link #1021
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@Quzor, Very impressive!!!!! I'll PM you and DtM with ideas for the story. Great Job!!!!
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Old 2007-11-17, 06:42   Link #1022
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Sounds good. I'm looking forward to hearing what ideas you've got, as well as getting a story written...thanks for making me a part!

Edit: New Jutsu for Tetsuo...

Earth Element: Grass Razor Blades (Doton: Kusa Kamisoriken): Tetsuo can infuse his chakra into the ground, reinforcing and sharpening the individual blades of grass. The blades will pierce through most common footwear, and shred most common clothing. This technique is especially useful in and around Negakure, where the grass tends to grow longer than normal.

Earth Element: Earth Uppercut (Doton: Yochi Appa-Katto): An interesting jutsu in which Tetsuo creates a "fist" out of earth which springs up from the ground straight into an enemy's jaw. He often uses it after he strikes them in the stomach, to get a clear shot. Tetsuo learned this technique from Kei Tezuka, after seeing her use it in the Chuunin exams. He was so impressed by it's power and uniqueness, that he begged her to teach it to him.
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Old 2007-11-17, 23:10   Link #1023
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General:
First Name: Illyria
Surname: Halliwell
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Height: 5 foot 5
Weight: 125
Village: Belongs to no village
Surviving Family Members:sister Rita and Mother Kitana
Father: Dead
First Name: Khi
Surname: Halliwell
Mother:Alive
First Name: Kitana
Surname: Halliwell
Little sister:Alive
First Name: Rita
Surname: Halliwell

Appearance:
Hair: Illyria Has Black Hair, Mostly in a bun or in a pony tail at times its Down
Eyes: Illyria Has Cold Grey eyes that turn Blood Firey Red when shes in Battle
Skin: Illyria is White a little tan
Clothes: White Tanktop, Black Leather Pants. Sometimes Her school Clothes, Busters and leather pants, or half open shirt with one side has a long sleve and the second is just sheer

Ninja Info:Illyria Was Trained By Three Ladys , Cinder Flame, Cinder Witch and the Flare Witch. But Later they Turned on Illyria Beliveing she would be a threat to them later in life. Illyria Killed All three, causing her to turn to the dark side, She is sometimes hired as an assassin to kill some people. shes a slayer with gifts she hasnt attended a school for her ninjas skills.
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Weapons: Illyria Uses Steel fans, Throwing knives, Twin Blades, a katana Sword, Sais, Demon Fang, Cross Bows a chain wip.
Summoning Contracts: kill alot of Masters and Teachers of High classes
Affinities:
Ninja Rank: uknown
Team: -some times her sister Rita
Missions: only the ones she got hired as an assassin
D-Rank: -
C-Rank: -
B-Rank: -
A-Rank: -
S-Rank: -
Commonly Used Jutsus: not really jutsus The gifts she has they are Time Minipulation,Fire minipulation,teleportation,phoenix blast,tellefurry,possession,blowing things up, Telle Attack, telle flame.
Name: Ki: telleflurry
Type:
Rank:
Effect: She teleports every were around her opponiets and uses her telecontic punches
Advantages/Disadvantages:
Hand Seals:

Name: Ki: Phoenix Blast
Type:
Rank:
Effect: This Ability allows Illyria to Make rapid of fire SHooting every were around her.
Advantages/Disadvantages: She would have to use her Telekensis to make it aim towards one thing
Hand Seals:

Name: Ki: Time Minipulations
Type:
Rank:
Effect: This Gives her the advantage to Mess with time she usually Stops Time or make time slow so she could get an easy kill
Advantages/Disadvantages: Dosent Keep people Moving Slow for Very long
Hand Seals:

Name: Ki: Possession
Type:
Rank:
Effect: Lets her possess ones body letting her do what ever to the body
Advantages/Disadvantages: can kill both her and her opponiet if shes in the opponites body for too long
Hand Seals:

Brief Life Story:
Illyria Was Born with gifts from her Mother. She later had a destiny as a Slayer Causing her to get Super human Strength. she Attended A ninja Accednmy for a little while untill her Father Died Causing her to become dark since she was very close to her father. She has a Rivary with her sister Rita. After a while she Was Taken in by three Witches Who taught her to use and to control her powers That lasted for some time untill the witches turned on Illyria. Now she occasionally works as an Assassin For money to live life. She dosnt have to do any thing with her hands unless shes Useing TIme minipulation and Phoenix blast.

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Old 2007-11-18, 03:00   Link #1024
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The Renku: a clan of freelance ninja sorta like patriots who come to add to those in trouble

Renku Leader: Yuuichi, never tells anyone last name
Age: 20
Eyes: Sea Blue
Skin: Pale
Yuuichi's Current Stats /100 ninjutsu 89/100 Genjustsu 73/100 Tyjutsu 87/100
Bio: When Yuuichi was young when the Kyuubi ravaged konoha he was saved by the 4th hokage and saw him use Rasengan which due to Yuuichi's bloodline limit (its later in post) He was able to use rasengan. When he heard the 4th gave his life for the village and imprisoned the Kyuubi into a village boy, Yuuichi Swore he would get stronger and pay back the 4th by protecting the boy. When he got older he made many varients to rasengan and made strong jutsu's. When he got to 17 he left the village became a missing nin he went around gathering up refugees from various wars and formed a secret village in uncharted mountains. This village has 200 villagers most women and children and the renku. The Renku consists of Yuuichi and 8 other ninja's who are masters of there own arts (i will post the other 8 people later) Once he turned 20 he discovered the Akakski and them targeting naruto so he finally after 3 years he returns to konoha in his renku uniform. (he returns right after naruto sakura and ero-sennin return from village of sound. He first mets the Kyuubi child at the ramen shack when he compliented naruto saying that naruto never stops eating ramen and thus Yuuichi offers to teach Naruto the Ra-Sen-Gan Mark II. When hes leaving with naruto from the Ramen shack Tsunade sees naruto walking off with a "mysterious person" and stops Yuuichi. This causes a big problem when about 4 jounin come in and yuuichi is forced to either flee and fail his promise to the 4th or to disarm the jounin. He chose to disarm them and shows off his first Technique

Rasengan-Mai: a lesser concentration of chakra weaker than rasengan but it has an advantage this one can be thrown up to 50 feet.

when the jounin are defeated and only tsunade is left Yuuichi removes his Renku Mask. Showing a normal face but since hes going against a Sannin he should have better vision. Then he promoses they move to a field and dont fight in konoha. So Tsunade Yuuichi and Naruto head to the field outside of Konoha
This is where Yuuichi Uses Genjutsu to make it look like he grabbed naruto and headed left when he headed right with him.
For the Next month Yuuichi Trains Naruto in the mountains and naruto becomes his appprentice.
When all the people that know naruto are worrying about him after a month Yuuichi and Naruto come back both hiding there faces in Renku Masks. They had made a rouse a day earlier that had naruto dead with a pool of blood next to it
and they were gonna drop "into" the funeral.
When they crash the party Tsunade accuses Yuuichi of killing naruto and Yuuichi explains his past about the 4th. Then Tsunade yelled Liar and aims for Yuuichis apprentice (naruto) and knocks off his mask. (Shocking scene!!) this causing alot of weird things to happen but it ends up yuuichi explaining last mnoth hes been teaching naruto. Naruto seems to have a more serious expression on his face and is alot smarter and takes things more seriously. Then Naruto is given a choice to stay a Renku or to go back to being a konoha Genin.

next installment soon

Weapons: Yuuichi is really smart and can make chakra enchanted items. His most genius invention is called a Chakra Absorber, it absorbs all chakra that comes in a 5 yard radius of him and adds to his. He has about 30 kunai and 15 shuriken in his pouch

Bloodline Limit: his bloodline limit is his brain has 100% more processing power than any normal person so he is able to decipher a jutsu and see how it works and to analyze anything.

Jutsu:

Rasengan-Mai: look up in bio

Ra-Sen-Gan MK II
first he hits his opponent with a weak normal rasengan then when his opponent is spinning moves under opponent and hits him up with another weak rasengan then moves above opponent and forms 2 rasengan in each hand then clasps then together and hits opponent into ground

Shadow Kunai: Usings genjutsu to make it look like 1000 kunai are heading towards opponent when only one is so opponent is very confused

Kami azu Jutsu: Causes Yuuichi to go into an insane speed where hes engulfed in red flames in 1 sec he can punch 100 times with Kami Azu in effect.

Cell Replacement jutsu: simple really using chakra he can regenerate body cells.

Tag-Team with naruto: Yu ko Za Ya: Naruto gets behind opponent while yuuichi comes from above in a genjutsu cloud when opponent counters naruto Yuuichi uses shadow kunai from opponents changed back when he turns naruto uses shadow clone jutsu puts a clone in his place and hides himself when opponent attacks clone Yuuichi attacks with rasengan on opponents back then naruto does Shadow Clones and performs Uzimaki Barrage (attacks called "Thousand Attack Barrage" or "Divine Smite"

Renku Uniform: a mordern navy seal looking mask, a dark suit with tons of pockets and belts to hold scrolls
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Old 2007-11-18, 05:57   Link #1025
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Wow, nice stuff, everyone! I feel that this thread can make a comeback yet! Thanks for the great reads! It makes me inspired enough to finish my own character designs... almost.
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Old 2007-11-18, 09:40   Link #1026
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Wow, nice stuff, everyone! I feel that this thread can make a comeback yet! Thanks for the great reads! It makes me inspired enough to finish my own character designs... almost.
Well, lets see if I can instill some further inspiration...

Name: Tsuzashi Mitsuki
Nickname: Mitsu-san
Age: 50
Sex: Male
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 148 lbs.
Rank: Special Jounin
Affinity: *unknown*
Home: Land of Storms, Village Hidden in the Treetops (Tengaigakure)
Age of:
Academy Graduation: N/A
Chuunin Exams: N/A
Jounin Selection: N/A, dubbed "Special Jounin" at age 36
ANBU Selection: N/A

Story:

Mitsuki is quite a rare breed. He has no ninja training of any kind, as he was born with no ability to mold chakra. He never had thoughts of entering the ninja academy, deciding instead to spend his life working the family farm. However, his life was destined to take an unfortunate, and interesting, turn.

At the age of 29, Mitsuki fell in love with a young woman, named Shiime Yuhiko. After only a brief period of dating, they were married and had a son. Yuhiko and Mitsuki were the proudest parents in the village, and concentrated on working hard to provide their son with everything he could ever want. But only a year after his birth, their son contracted a severe case of pneumonia, and died. This loss caused Yuhiko and Mitsuki great pain, and drove Mitsuki to drinking. Eventually, his drinking became unbearable, and Yuhiko left Mitsuki to wallow in his misery.

Mitsuki continued to drink, and stopped working. His farm suffered, stopped producing, and was destroyed. He began wandering the streets, begging for any change he could get so he could continue to drink. His life was consumed by pain at the loss of his son, wife, and home. But then, just when Mitsuki had given up on life, a miraculous thing happened.

Mitsuki approached a man, a ninja, and began begging for change. The man dismissed him, told him to get a job, and walked on. Mitsuki, drunk and enraged that the man would presume to know anything about him, began shouting and accosting the young man, who turned to drive a punch into Mitsu's jaw. Suddenly, the man found himself on the ground, screaming in pain, his hand clasped in Mitsuki's vice-grip. Without realizing it, Mitsuki had blocked the man's attack, and began crushing his hand. Finally, he realized what was happening, and let go. The man ran off, screams of pain trailing behind him. What was this ability that had suddenly made itself known?

Mitsuki had to know more. He began attacking other street people; petty thieves, beggars, and the like. He found that he was able to overpower them all, and quite easily. This was the touch of fate he had been waiting for. He vowed to quit drinking, and lead a life of public service.

The next day, clean and sober, Mitsuki ventured out to see who might need saving, and help them. He came across an old woman, attempting to wrestle her purse from a young man. Mitsuki rushed into action, confident that he would be able to help this woman. Suddenly he awoke, sprawled on the ground, an intense pain in his jaw. What had happened? Had yesterday been a fluke? Disappointed, Mitsuki sauntered to the nearest bar and ordered a drink, and another, and another. Before long, he was as drunk as he had ever been. Moments later, another patron of the bar began hassling one of the young female servers. Mitsuki spoke up, asking the person to stop, leave the young woman alone. The man, without fear of this senior citizen, approached and threatened, "What're you gonna do about it, old man!?" He reached back to knock the old man to the floor, only to find himself among the chair legs. This old man, in an invisible instant, had put him to the ground. What magic was this? Scared and confused, the man left the bar, and Mitsuki, in wonderment. Mitsuki left the bar as well, examining his hands and arms in an attempt to understand what was going on. Following a third occurrence of this nature, Mitsuki came to the realization of the goings-on; drinking seemed to give him supernatural powers.

He needed answers, needed understanding. He sought the council of the village leader, the great Inaki Yobori. Yobori was happy to meet with Mitsuki, hoping to help the man understand what was happening. After a few drinks, Yobori challenged Mitsuki to a sparring match. Much to Yobori's surprise, Mitsuki was quicker than most ninja under his command, despite his being quite drunk. After a short bout, Yobori explained to Mitsuki that his drinking seemed to unlock a special gift within him; the gift of taijutsu. He called it the "Drunken Fist (Suiken)" style, and proclaimed Mitsuki a genius, beyond anyone, in its ways. Yobori appointed Mitsuki a "Special Jounin" and dubbed him the newest member of the ninja ranks of Tengaigakure. Though still confused, Mitsuki accepted his new position gratefully, happy to have a new lease on life.

Today, Mitsuki is one of the proudest members of the village, and the shinobi forces. He participates in many missions for the village, generally with great success. Though he is unable to use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, his Taijutsu skills more than make up for it, provided he is drunk. This being the case, Mitsuki makes sure to always have a bottle (or two or three or four) on hand, just in case Yobori doesn't give him one for free.

Appearance: Mitsu-san has short hair that would be white, if it weren't so dirty from his years on the street. He's not a fat man, but neither is he a rail. He wears a red cloak, mesh shirt, and baggy white pants that hang down just below his ankles. The ensemble is wrapped up by a tattered pair of workman's boots, to which Mitsuki was too attached to exchange for shinobi sandals. He forgoes the village headband, claiming the fabric wrapped around his forehead gives him a headache (though most suspect his headaches are from the copious amounts of alcohol he consumes on a regular basis). He appears as a run-of-the-mill homeless man, but is much more than that.

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Old 2007-11-18, 11:16   Link #1027
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Hmm if thats the Case Ill do more Than That :D



Name: Illyria Kitana Halliwell
Nickname: Cinder Flame
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 125lbs.
Rank: Dark Slayer
Affinity: *unknown*
Home: Cinder Town
Age of:
Academy Graduation: N/A
Chuunin Exams: N/A
Jounin Selection: N/A
ANBU Selection: N/A

Illyria a Dark Slayer Of the Cinder Clan.
She Fights For herself and To realease the Darkness from Inside of her.
She Wanted to be a ninja all of her life but after her father died she set off on her own ,
untill she met the three witches Cinder Witch, Ember Flame and The Fare Witch,
Were they Later Turned on her After teaching her how to use the power from her blood line.
She learned The powers Of Time Minipulation, Fire Minipulation, Telekenesis, teleportation, and blowing things up.

Her Jutsus are Phoenx Blast, TeleFurry, TelleBlast. Night shadow, possession.

She Uses Her Jutsus alot But More often Her Gifts. she takes her destiny as a slayer Seriously. Killing any threats towards her or any innocent. the only hand thing she needs to do is put two fingers on her forhead and then take her other hand and connect the two fingers that was on the head to the other to fingers.

her appernce are usually busters and leather pants with a sheer skirt and on the arm and it connects to her neck choker. also a white tanktop and Black leather pants, some times she weres her school clothes, other times she weres a half opened shirt with a half open black leather pants. her hair is usually in a bun or in a ponytail or just plain down.

She Also Takes on Duties as an assassin, Her rival is her own flesh and blood Rita, She Tryed to kill Rita More than once. But Rita always find a way to get her self to saftey.

her wepons are steel fans, Bow gun, cross bow, Demon fang, Twin Blades, Sais and a katana shes also uses ninja stars and Throwing knives.

She Learned Ninja Skills from a Female Assassin Who Retired from Fighting She Was also a ninja From A place Uknown.

The lady Name Was Li Mei Rookaling mardru She was In her late or middle 70s, She taught Illyria Everything she Knows about Her Ninjas SKills and How to control her gifts.

She also Told Illyria Of her Future And Told her that She Needs to come back to the Good Side and Do her PArt as a Slayer the Right Way. She Told her THat It Was a Mistake to be an Assassin because the killing really dosnt stop haunting you. The old Lady Passed her Preminitions to Illyria

When Illyria was 19 The Old Lady passed away from a rare sicknesss.

Illyria set off to Become a Ninja Having to come back to the light side of the world, Illyria Sister, Rita, Tried to kill Illyria But Ended Up dead By a Female Ninja Who shot her in the back with an Arrow.

Illyria Was Hurt, Having her to train harder for revenge.

Untill She Finds Herself in a Villiage full of Strong Ninjas and Worriors.

( AND THATS WERE YOU GUYS COME IN YOU CONTINUE YOU THE STORY WITH YOUR CHARACTERS. ILLYRIA MEETS ALL OF YOUR CHARACTERS. )

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Old 2007-11-18, 12:08   Link #1028
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Here! this will change your mind Spectacular Insanity!

Name: Rankei
Age: 16
Rank: Jonin
Sex: Male
Relatives: Kankuro's grandson
Style of Jutsu: Death/Lightning Style
Story: Rankei is like another version of Gaara, but Rankei has his indifferences. When he was born, his left arm and half of his face were skeletons. Later on in his life, he killed his mother and father. With nothing to do now, he joined the sound ninja academy and made Chunin with ease. He was offered to become Jonin and accepted. Then the leader of Akatsuki came and offered him a deal with that organization. Rankei turned them down and killed all but the leader, Itachi, Sasori, and Diedra. Rankei left his village to hunt these people down and kill them with any means possible.

Kekki Genkai: N/A

Jutsu:

1. Death Terrain Jutsu___Using his chakra, Rankei summons an illusion of a grave yard to fight the opponent in. Every few minutes, undead zombie clones come out and assist Rankei.
ADVANTAGES: Can seriously tire out the opponent.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

2. Shocking Thrust___A standard thrust with chakra molded in the form of lightning.
ADVANTAGES: Hurts the opponent badly.
WEEKNESSES: If misses, takes a while to recover.

3. Zap Spear Jutsu___Molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them at the opponent.
ADVANTAGES: Doesn't require alot of chakra.
WEEKNESSES: Easy to dodge.

4.Thunder Cage Jutsu___ Following the zap spear jutsu, Rankei molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them all at one time to form a lightning box around the opponent. If the captured ninja touches one of the sides, he gets shocked.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the fight is won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

5. Undead Virus___Molds chakra into a dead virus. He then punches the virus into the opponent. Following that, it slowly takes the opponent's health.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the battle is pretty much over.
WEEKNESSES: Takes a lot of chakra.

6. Death Chakra Bat___ Summons a dead bat to fly to the opponent, bite it, and take its chakra like a real bat.
ADVANTAGES: Once again, if hits the fight is already won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

Techniques/Weapons:
1. Death Barrage___A simple barrage with the word death in it to amplify the name!

2. Lightning Gloves___Molds chakra into lightning gloves to use against the opponent.

3. Smoke Bombs___A simple little ball that when thrown on the ground makes smoke around the area.

4. 2h Heavy Sword___A large sword that requires 2 hands.

Appearance:

Black hair, spiky; one half of his face is a skull; black top and bottom; black robes; right hand is a skeleton; white skin.


Well Rankei may not be my best work, but still, quote it if you have any comments!

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Old 2007-11-18, 12:15   Link #1029
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Here! this will change your mind Spectacular Insanity!

Name: Rankei
Age: 16
Rank: Jonin
Sex: Male
Relatives: Kankuro's grandson
Style of Jutsu: Death/Lightning Style
Story: Rankei is like another version of Gaara, but Rankei has his indifferences. When he was born, his left arm and half of his face were skeletons. Later on in his life, he killed his mother and father. With nothing to do now, he joined the sound ninja academy and made Chunin with ease. He was offered to become Jonin and accepted. Then the leader of Akatsuki came and offered him a deal with that organization. Rankei turned them down and killed all but the leader, Itachi, Sasori, and Diedra. Rankei left his village to hunt these people down and kill them with any means possible.

Kekki Genkai: N/A

Jutsu:

1. Death Terrain Jutsu___Using his chakra, Rankei summons an illusion of a grave yard to fight the opponent in. Every few minutes, undead zombie clones come out and assist Rankei.
ADVANTAGES: Can seriously tire out the opponent.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

2. Shocking Thrust___A standard thrust with chakra molded in the form of lightning.
ADVANTAGES: Hurts the opponent badly.
WEEKNESSES: If misses, takes a while to recover.

3. Zap Spear Jutsu___Molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them at the opponent.
ADVANTAGES: Doesn't require alot of chakra.
WEEKNESSES: Easy to dodge.

4.Thunder Cage Jutsu___ Following the zap spear jutsu, Rankei molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them all at one time to form a lightning box around the opponent. If the captured ninja touches one of the sides, he gets shocked.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the fight is won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

5. Undead Virus___Molds chakra into a dead virus. He then punches the virus into the opponent. Following that, it slowly takes the opponent's health.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the battle is pretty much over.
WEEKNESSES: Takes a lot of chakra.

6. Death Chakra Bat___ Summons a dead bat to fly to the opponent, bite it, and take its chakra like a real bat.
ADVANTAGES: Once again, if hits the fight is already won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

Techniques/Weapons:
1. Death Barrage___A simple barrage with the word death in it to amplify the name!

2. Lightning Gloves___Molds chakra into lightning gloves to use against the opponent.

3. Smoke Bombs___A simple little ball that when thrown on the ground makes smoke around the area.

4. 2h Heavy Sword___A large sword that requires 2 hands.

Appearance:

Black hair, spiky; one half of his face is a skull; black top and bottom; black robes; right hand is a skeleton; white skin.


Well Rankei may not be my best work, but still, quote it if you have any comments!

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Actually, I like this character. The whole "half a skeleton" thing is cool...and quite original. The only thing I'd like to see is less "one-hit victory" techniques. The chakra bat and zap spear are cool, and the death terrain jutsu sounds like a cool genjutsu-style attack, but the rest are a little...extreme. Perhaps if they just shock the enemy, or have some sort of effect on the opponents chakra. Maybe that's what you intended, and just didn't get specific, but when I see "if hit the fight is pretty much won," I tend to think one-hit kill. Just a suggestion, cool character with interesting jutsus. Keep up the good work!
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Old 2007-11-19, 00:31   Link #1030
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Here! this will change your mind Spectacular Insanity!

Name: Rankei
Age: 16
Rank: Jonin
Sex: Male
Relatives: Kankuro's grandson
Style of Jutsu: Death/Lightning Style
Story: Rankei is like another version of Gaara, but Rankei has his indifferences. When he was born, his left arm and half of his face were skeletons. Later on in his life, he killed his mother and father. With nothing to do now, he joined the sound ninja academy and made Chunin with ease. He was offered to become Jonin and accepted. Then the leader of Akatsuki came and offered him a deal with that organization. Rankei turned them down and killed all but the leader, Itachi, Sasori, and Diedra. Rankei left his village to hunt these people down and kill them with any means possible.

Kekki Genkai: N/A

Jutsu:

1. Death Terrain Jutsu___Using his chakra, Rankei summons an illusion of a grave yard to fight the opponent in. Every few minutes, undead zombie clones come out and assist Rankei.
ADVANTAGES: Can seriously tire out the opponent.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

2. Shocking Thrust___A standard thrust with chakra molded in the form of lightning.
ADVANTAGES: Hurts the opponent badly.
WEEKNESSES: If misses, takes a while to recover.

3. Zap Spear Jutsu___Molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them at the opponent.
ADVANTAGES: Doesn't require alot of chakra.
WEEKNESSES: Easy to dodge.

4.Thunder Cage Jutsu___ Following the zap spear jutsu, Rankei molds chakra into lightning rods and throws them all at one time to form a lightning box around the opponent. If the captured ninja touches one of the sides, he gets shocked.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the fight is won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

5. Undead Virus___Molds chakra into a dead virus. He then punches the virus into the opponent. Following that, it slowly takes the opponent's health.
ADVANTAGES: If hits, the battle is pretty much over.
WEEKNESSES: Takes a lot of chakra.

6. Death Chakra Bat___ Summons a dead bat to fly to the opponent, bite it, and take its chakra like a real bat.
ADVANTAGES: Once again, if hits the fight is already won.
WEEKNESSES: Requires alot of chakra.

Techniques/Weapons:
1. Death Barrage___A simple barrage with the word death in it to amplify the name!

2. Lightning Gloves___Molds chakra into lightning gloves to use against the opponent.

3. Smoke Bombs___A simple little ball that when thrown on the ground makes smoke around the area.

4. 2h Heavy Sword___A large sword that requires 2 hands.

Appearance:

Black hair, spiky; one half of his face is a skull; black top and bottom; black robes; right hand is a skeleton; white skin.


Well Rankei may not be my best work, but still, quote it if you have any comments!

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I agree with Quzor in, virtually every way. I can see how being half skeleton would be useful, even just to scare opponents, I mean a half skeleton half human would creepy even shinobi out.

Iwas thinking about that Undead Virus jutsu ... if you say that it slows Rankei down when using it, making it harder for him to actually hit the opponent, then it may make up for the one-hit kill. Also, I don't know if you thought about this but how does this virus kill?? Does it shut down the heart, the brain, muscles, internal organs, what? Because that could effect how fast it kills. If it shuts down the heart then if Rankei hits with the virus in his opponents leg, then, yes his opponent is infected with the virus but it may take time for it to reach the opponents heart and shut it down, giving Rankei's opponent time to do damage.

Otherwise good character. write on
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Quzor, those last two characters are amazing! A badass Negakure leader, and an invincible drunk! You have a real knack for making good characters... I couldn't come up with stuff like that if I tried.

Though I do come up with stuff like this...

Name: Kei Tezuka
Age: 19
Village: Negakure
Rank: Chuunin

Spoiler:


Kei comes from the lower areas of Negakure, where she lived in poverty for most of her life. At one point early in her childhood, she and her parents were living in comfort in the upper villages, until her father was killed on a mission. Kei's mother, who had no means of income struggled to find work and support her daughter, but her efforts yielded no results, and they were forced to move to worse and worse areas of the village, just to get enough money to get by. Around the time Kei turned 8, her mother enrolled her in the Negakure Ninja Academy. Kei had seen the enrollment as a new opportunity, and trained dilligently every day, always studying and practicing as hard as possible. She eventually graduated, third in her class, and requested to take on missions as soon as possible.
However, not soon after her graduation, her mother was attacked by a mugger, and was stabbed while trying to resist him. Kei tried to find a doctor, but nobody in the area took interest in someone who had no money. Despite Kei's efforts her mother died the next day from internal bleeding. The event traumatized her so much she spun into a severe depression, shutting herself off from everyone, and soon became violent towards anyone who got on her nerves, and with the rude and troublesome people in her area, that happened quite often.
One day, the Negakure's leader himself assigned her a mission with Kazeashi Yokoi, in hopes of helping her disposition by assigning her with a generally light hearted ninja. The pair were at each other's thoats at first, but quickly became good friends, and eventually developed a romantic relationship. Her outlook has changed almost completely, matching Kazeashi's optimistic personality and light hearted approach to most non-mission situations. She now likes with Kazeashi up in the upper regions of Negakure, but often ventures below into the roots to help children and families in poverty by playing with the children and buying food.


Kei isn't much of a fighter. She enjoys practicing martial arts, but doesn't enjoy using them for violence. She tries to ignore this if she runs into trouble on a mission, but she always asks to resolve problems reasonably before she takes action. So far, to her disapproval, only one opponent has ever listened to her, and he was a simple street thug with no ninja training. She is well known for her skill in spear/naginata fighting, which many consider to be too cumbersome and large for combat amongst ninja. Her persona weapon, which she has affectionately name Ikkaku, breaks into a three-section staff at will, allowing the weapon to be devastating at long and close ranges, as well as breaking down for easier transportation.

As far as jutsu, Kei is proficient in Earth techniques. Kazeashi has taught her a few of his wind jutsu as well, but she isn't very good at using them. None of her jutsu are particularly destructive, since her chakra isn't strong enough for high-level jutsu, but they do the job just as well.

Earth Uppercut - An interesting jutsu in which Kei creates a "fist" out of earth which springs up from the ground straight into an enemy's jaw. She often uses it after she strikes them in the stomach, to get a clear shot.

Blinding Dust - Kei combines her limited wind jutsu with earth to create a large cloud of dust and dirt which is blown into an enemy's face. It's extremely irritating, and usually gives Kei ample time to attack while they're stunned.

Stone Springboard - Afteer doing the hand signs for the jutsu, Kei slams her hand onto the ground right underneath her. As soon as she taps her foot, a large pillar of soil and stone rises from the ground, launching Kei into the air in any direction she needs. This jutsu often helps her keep up with Kazeashi when he's airborn.

Alright, I'm done. Goodnight.
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Quzor, those last two characters are amazing! A badass Negakure leader, and an invincible drunk! You have a real knack for making good characters... I couldn't come up with stuff like that if I tried.

Though I do come up with stuff like this...

Name: Kei Tezuka
Age: 19
Village: Negakure
Rank: Chuunin

Spoiler:


Kei comes from the lower areas of Negakure, where she lived in poverty for most of her life. At one point early in her childhood, she and her parents were living in comfort in the upper villages, until her father was killed on a mission. Kei's mother, who had no means of income struggled to find work and support her daughter, but her efforts yielded no results, and they were forced to move to worse and worse areas of the village, just to get enough money to get by. Around the time Kei turned 8, her mother enrolled her in the Negakure Ninja Academy. Kei had seen the enrollment as a new opportunity, and trained dilligently every day, always studying and practicing as hard as possible. She eventually graduated, third in her class, and requested to take on missions as soon as possible.
However, not soon after her graduation, her mother was attacked by a mugger, and was stabbed while trying to resist him. Kei tried to find a doctor, but nobody in the area took interest in someone who had no money. Despite Kei's efforts her mother died the next day from internal bleeding. The event traumatized her so much she spun into a severe depression, shutting herself off from everyone, and soon became violent towards anyone who got on her nerves, and with the rude and troublesome people in her area, that happened quite often.
One day, the Negakure's leader himself assigned her a mission with Kazeashi Yokoi, in hopes of helping her disposition by assigning her with a generally light hearted ninja. The pair were at each other's thoats at first, but quickly became good friends, and eventually developed a romantic relationship. Her outlook has changed almost completely, matching Kazeashi's optimistic personality and light hearted approach to most non-mission situations. She now likes with Kazeashi up in the upper regions of Negakure, but often ventures below into the roots to help children and families in poverty by playing with the children and buying food.


Kei isn't much of a fighter. She enjoys practicing martial arts, but doesn't enjoy using them for violence. She tries to ignore this if she runs into trouble on a mission, but she always asks to resolve problems reasonably before she takes action. So far, to her disapproval, only one opponent has ever listened to her, and he was a simple street thug with no ninja training. She is well known for her skill in spear/naginata fighting, which many consider to be too cumbersome and large for combat amongst ninja. Her persona weapon, which she has affectionately name Ikkaku, breaks into a three-section staff at will, allowing the weapon to be devastating at long and close ranges, as well as breaking down for easier transportation.

As far as jutsu, Kei is proficient in Earth techniques. Kazeashi has taught her a few of his wind jutsu as well, but she isn't very good at using them. None of her jutsu are particularly destructive, since her chakra isn't strong enough for high-level jutsu, but they do the job just as well.

Earth Uppercut - An interesting jutsu in which Kei creates a "fist" out of earth which springs up from the ground straight into an enemy's jaw. She often uses it after she strikes them in the stomach, to get a clear shot.

Blinding Dust - Kei combines her limited wind jutsu with earth to create a large cloud of dust and dirt which is blown into an enemy's face. It's extremely irritating, and usually gives Kei ample time to attack while they're stunned.

Stone Springboard - Afteer doing the hand signs for the jutsu, Kei slams her hand onto the ground right underneath her. As soon as she taps her foot, a large pillar of soil and stone rises from the ground, launching Kei into the air in any direction she needs. This jutsu often helps her keep up with Kazeashi when he's airborn.

Alright, I'm done. Goodnight.
Hey thanks man! To be honest, though, I'd trade my character skills for your artistic ability; that picture is bad ass! Also, much props for the staff/three-section staff usage...they need some of that in Naruto as far as I'm concerned. Cool character, especially the jutsu. I LOVE (seriously) that Earth Uppercut Technique. I always want to think of cool stuff like that, but can't ever get it to come out for me. Maybe she'd be willing to teach it to Tetsuo? Anyway, nice character DtM; you live up to your name once again!
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Old 2007-11-20, 14:37   Link #1033
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Hello. I have a new power in the sharingan, thanks to MS. The ability to copy Kekkei Genkai through Eye Contact. I know it sounds insane, but listen... The Sharingan can copy any jutsu, and the MS is more powerful... It makes sense that more powerful jutsu copy is Kekkei Genkai. Another power of the MS is the ability to mask one's own jutsu against the sharingan.
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Old 2007-11-20, 19:52   Link #1034
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Shawa-ofshakuyaku no jutsu
(shower of peony technique)

amai fumou no jutsu
(sweet sour technique)

My characters name would be hyuuga hana and I would be very quiet and read write nd draw but when I fought I would be stronger then all my team mates I would talk to naruto and become his freind. and I would hang out with hinata and sakura.

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I'm kinda new but here's my character.

Kori Itsugai
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10''
Age: 15
Family: None
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jonin, SRNT (Special Rogue Ninja Tracker)
Weapon of choice: Yin-Yang Blade/Giant katana with the yin-yang sign on both sides of the hand guard, longer than he is tall
Original Jutsu: Slash from Hell- Yang symbol glows on sword and when enemy is cut all of their chakra is put into the blade.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Easy way to get extra chakra for sword based moves, but is easy to detect.

Slash from Heaven- Yin symgol shines radiantly and stored chakra can be given to allies or used to purify Jinchurikki.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Provides energy to weak allies, but it is easy to intercept.

Dragon Upper- Wind and fire swirl around his hand and are used to inflict direct damage to enemies. Works best when Kori can find leaves or grass to fuel the flames.

Missions: S rank- tracked Orichimaru for a month, Tsunade's orders

Clothing: White jacket, black pants, sandals

Description: Kori's hair and eyes are dark brown, and his skin is light brown. His hair is also braided in spiky dreadlocks that hang over his headband. He is enigmatic and usually keeps to himself, but Kiba claims to have seen him flirting with various girls. When he was five years old he was rescued by two scouting Anbu Black Ops members. No one knows who raised him or where he came from. He is a Jinchurikki like Naruto, posessed by a white wolf demon with yin-yang symbols for eyes. He can be seen talking to Shino or walking around with his huge blade on his back.
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Old 2007-11-21, 01:34   Link #1036
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Hey thanks man! To be honest, though, I'd trade my character skills for your artistic ability; that picture is bad ass! Also, much props for the staff/three-section staff usage...they need some of that in Naruto as far as I'm concerned. Cool character, especially the jutsu. I LOVE (seriously) that Earth Uppercut Technique. I always want to think of cool stuff like that, but can't ever get it to come out for me. Maybe she'd be willing to teach it to Tetsuo? Anyway, nice character DtM; you live up to your name once again!
I'm glad you like my drawing. If you'd like, I'd be more than glad to draw your characters for you. I've done it for a lot of Aderian242's characters, along with a couple other characters. If not, I can give you a few drawing tips.
Tetsuo is more than welcome to the Earth Uppercut Jutsu, I'd say he could put it to good use. The more I dwell on it it seems like it could be a really powerful jutsu if you happen to be around the right earth, like a rock quarry or something. One smack, and an unlicky ninja is eating applesauce and fish paste throgh straws for months. An awesome way to knock someone's ego down a few pegs. I'm getting a good laugh out of imagining Orochimaru with a wired jaw and mumbling through large dental headgear instead of having disabled arms. Hi-larious.

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I'm kinda new but here's my character.

Kori Itsugai
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10''
Age: 15
Family: None
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Jonin, SRNT (Special Rogue Ninja Tracker)
Weapon of choice: Yin-Yang Blade/Giant katana with the yin-yang sign on both sides of the hand guard, longer than he is tall
Original Jutsu: Slash from Hell- Yang symbol glows on sword and when enemy is cut all of their chakra is put into the blade.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Easy way to get extra chakra for sword based moves, but is easy to detect.

Slash from Heaven- Yin symgol shines radiantly and stored chakra can be given to allies or used to purify Jinchurikki.
Advantages/Disadvantages: Provides energy to weak allies, but it is easy to intercept.

Dragon Upper- Wind and fire swirl around his hand and are used to inflict direct damage to enemies. Works best when Kori can find leaves or grass to fuel the flames.

Missions: S rank- tracked Orichimaru for a month, Tsunade's orders

Clothing: White jacket, black pants, sandals

Description: Kori's hair and eyes are dark brown, and his skin is light brown. His hair is also braided in spiky dreadlocks that hang over his headband. He is enigmatic and usually keeps to himself, but Kiba claims to have seen him flirting with various girls. When he was five years old he was rescued by two scouting Anbu Black Ops members. No one knows who raised him or where he came from. He is a Jinchurikki like Naruto, posessed by a white wolf demon with yin-yang symbols for eyes. He can be seen talking to Shino or walking around with his huge blade on his back.
Welcome to the forum. Not bad for a (first?) character. A little short on details, though. I'd like to see a more detailed backstory for him.
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Old 2007-11-21, 06:41   Link #1037
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I'm glad you like my drawing. If you'd like, I'd be more than glad to draw your characters for you. I've done it for a lot of Aderian242's characters, along with a couple other characters. If not, I can give you a few drawing tips.
Tetsuo is more than welcome to the Earth Uppercut Jutsu, I'd say he could put it to good use. The more I dwell on it it seems like it could be a really powerful jutsu if you happen to be around the right earth, like a rock quarry or something. One smack, and an unlicky ninja is eating applesauce and fish paste throgh straws for months. An awesome way to knock someone's ego down a few pegs. I'm getting a good laugh out of imagining Orochimaru with a wired jaw and mumbling through large dental headgear instead of having disabled arms. Hi-larious.
Haha, too funny. I can totally see Orochimaru in the dental headgear, mostly because I remember my own (how sad). Feel free to draw any of my characters you want; I'd be interested to see how someone else sees them compared to how I envisioned them.

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Welcome to the forum. Not bad for a (first?) character. A little short on details, though. I'd like to see a more detailed backstory for him.
Agreed. More back story for sure (if he has any). I'd be really interested to hear about how he became a Jinchuuriki, as well as more about his Bijuu; I like the idea of the eyes making it powerful, rather than a certain number of tails. Nice work though, those jutsus are very cool.
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Old 2007-11-21, 08:46   Link #1038
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try plz

you can try to draw illyria. i no how to draw but id ike to see how u make her look
im up to new ideas of how she looks
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Quzor, those last two characters are amazing! A badass Negakure leader, and an invincible drunk! You have a real knack for making good characters... I couldn't come up with stuff like that if I tried.

Though I do come up with stuff like this...

Name: Kei Tezuka
Age: 19
Village: Negakure
Rank: Chuunin

Spoiler:


Kei comes from the lower areas of Negakure, where she lived in poverty for most of her life. At one point early in her childhood, she and her parents were living in comfort in the upper villages, until her father was killed on a mission. Kei's mother, who had no means of income struggled to find work and support her daughter, but her efforts yielded no results, and they were forced to move to worse and worse areas of the village, just to get enough money to get by. Around the time Kei turned 8, her mother enrolled her in the Negakure Ninja Academy. Kei had seen the enrollment as a new opportunity, and trained dilligently every day, always studying and practicing as hard as possible. She eventually graduated, third in her class, and requested to take on missions as soon as possible.
However, not soon after her graduation, her mother was attacked by a mugger, and was stabbed while trying to resist him. Kei tried to find a doctor, but nobody in the area took interest in someone who had no money. Despite Kei's efforts her mother died the next day from internal bleeding. The event traumatized her so much she spun into a severe depression, shutting herself off from everyone, and soon became violent towards anyone who got on her nerves, and with the rude and troublesome people in her area, that happened quite often.
One day, the Negakure's leader himself assigned her a mission with Kazeashi Yokoi, in hopes of helping her disposition by assigning her with a generally light hearted ninja. The pair were at each other's thoats at first, but quickly became good friends, and eventually developed a romantic relationship. Her outlook has changed almost completely, matching Kazeashi's optimistic personality and light hearted approach to most non-mission situations. She now likes with Kazeashi up in the upper regions of Negakure, but often ventures below into the roots to help children and families in poverty by playing with the children and buying food.


Kei isn't much of a fighter. She enjoys practicing martial arts, but doesn't enjoy using them for violence. She tries to ignore this if she runs into trouble on a mission, but she always asks to resolve problems reasonably before she takes action. So far, to her disapproval, only one opponent has ever listened to her, and he was a simple street thug with no ninja training. She is well known for her skill in spear/naginata fighting, which many consider to be too cumbersome and large for combat amongst ninja. Her persona weapon, which she has affectionately name Ikkaku, breaks into a three-section staff at will, allowing the weapon to be devastating at long and close ranges, as well as breaking down for easier transportation.

As far as jutsu, Kei is proficient in Earth techniques. Kazeashi has taught her a few of his wind jutsu as well, but she isn't very good at using them. None of her jutsu are particularly destructive, since her chakra isn't strong enough for high-level jutsu, but they do the job just as well.

Earth Uppercut - An interesting jutsu in which Kei creates a "fist" out of earth which springs up from the ground straight into an enemy's jaw. She often uses it after she strikes them in the stomach, to get a clear shot.

Blinding Dust - Kei combines her limited wind jutsu with earth to create a large cloud of dust and dirt which is blown into an enemy's face. It's extremely irritating, and usually gives Kei ample time to attack while they're stunned.

Stone Springboard - Afteer doing the hand signs for the jutsu, Kei slams her hand onto the ground right underneath her. As soon as she taps her foot, a large pillar of soil and stone rises from the ground, launching Kei into the air in any direction she needs. This jutsu often helps her keep up with Kazeashi when he's airborn.

Alright, I'm done. Goodnight.
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Old 2007-11-21, 13:24   Link #1039
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I'm feeling the need to write a new one...

Name: Futomaki Shinsuke
Nickname: N/A (He doesn't like nicknames)
Age: 15
Sex: Male
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 131 lbs.
Rank: Chuunin
Affinity: Wind
Home: Land of Storms, Village Hidden in the Roots (Negakure)
Age of:
Academy Graduation: 11
Chuunin Exams: 14
Jounin Selection: N/A
ANBU Selection: N/A

Story:

Very little is known about Shinsuke's family. He was left on the orphanage steps as an infant; only his name was on the accompanying note. His life was not particularly difficult, but it was not as easy as many others. As Shinsuke grew, he became curious about the shinobi of the village. Eventually, that curiosity became an infatuation, and he enrolled in the Ninja Academy at the age of 9.

The academy was a challenge for Shinsuke. He was not as talented as most, and had difficulty concentrating; he was more interested in the missions than the training it took to be a part of them. It took a couple of years, but Shinsuke was finally able to show enough prowess to graduate at the age of 11.

After graduation, Shinsuke began to focus much harder. Now that he would be allowed to complete missions, he wanted to be as effective as possible. Recognizing his work ethic and determined nature, his teacher decided to offer him some one-on-one training, specifically regarding elemental chakra manipulation. After a brief test, it was discovered that Shinsuke had a natural affinity to wind chakra, and his teacher set out to show him the ways of the wind.

Soon, the basic techniques of the wind became tedious for Shinsuke. He desperately wanted to learn new, more exciting wind-based techniques. His teacher suggested he seek out the tutelage of the "Master of Air" Kazeashi Yokoi, Negakure's resident wind expert. Shinsuke was elated, Kazeashi seemed to be uninterested. He spent a brief amount of time trying to teach Shinsuke a few different wind techniques, but seemed to be more interested in wreaking havoc on women's skirts, and participating in missions. Dejected, Shinsuke decided to work at wind manipulation himself, and was able to come up with a few interesting techniques of his own.

As a Genin, Shinsuke spent less than the average amount of time on missions, deciding to focus more on training his new skills. He did, however, complete 8 D-rank missions and 7 C-rank missions in his three years as a genin. Following the completion of his last mission, Shinsuke made it known that he wanted to enter the Chuunin Exams, and his teacher sully supported him.

The Exams were arduous for Shinsuke; he struggled constantly and had trouble keeping up with the talents of his fellow competing shinobi. Having spent so much time working on wind techniques, he found himself severely disadvantaged in fights where basic techniques would have been most effective. However, he persevered and was able to pass the Chuunin Exams, though just by the skin of his teeth.

As a Chuunin, Shinsuke has led no missions. The Village leader, Shingashi Tetsuo, feels he does not yet possess the necessary leadership skills or basic skill mastery necessary to be an effective leader. However, he has participated in 5 missions in his first year (4 C-rank, 1 B-rank), with 100% success thus far. He continues to work on perfecting both his basic and wind techniques, in the hopes that he can become a great team leader, and eventually advance to Jounin.

Appearance: Shinsuke has long black hair, tied into a ponytail that falls about halfway down his back. He wears a plain white t-shirt and black pants, and finishes with a pair of traditional shinobi sandals, also white. He carries a pair of sais, attached to his back with a black, utility-style belt. The white makes him a standout in the village, something he greatly enjoys. However, it also makes him a bit of a standout on missions, something everyone else greatly laments.

Jutsu:

Wind Element: Wind Spear (Fuuton: Kaze Yari): Shinsuke concentrates wind chakra into the palms of his hands, then sharpens and elongates the chakra to form a spear. This spear is sharper than any contained in the village, and Shinsuke is an expert at wielding it. He continues to work on a way to throw the spear, as it currently dissipates when it leaves his hand.

Wind Element: Strengthened Sai (Fuuton: Sai Kyouka): Sinsuke surrounds his Sais with wind chakra, elongating them by three inches, and sharpening them to the same degree as his spear. By forcing enough chakra into the sais, Shinsuke is able to throw them a great distance while they are still sharp.

Air Shield Technique (Tenkuu Tate no Jutsu): Shinsuke concentrates his chakra into the surrounding air, creating a spherical barrier around his entire body. This technique can be extended to include greater areas, but the larger it gets the weaker it becomes, and the harder it is to maintain. While using this technique, Shinsuke is unable to move effectively, though it is also difficult to strike him.

Ninja Art: Vacuum (Ninpou: Kuuhaku): By molding wind chakra into his feet, Shinsuke's speed is dramatically increased. He then molds wind chakra into his hands, and begins circling the enemy, blasting air away from the enemy and creating a vacuum around them. This technique causes the target extreme pain, but also tires Shinsuke at an alarming rate. It is generally ineffective in a one-on-one battle, but works well in a group where the enemy can be attacked after succumbing to this technique.

Wind Element: Destabilizing Gust (Fuuton: Futsuriai Hitofuki): Shinsuke starts by concentrating an extreme amount of wind chakra into his hands. He then thrusts them outward, towards the enemy, forcing the chakra out through his palms. The ensuing gust is strong enough to not only knock the enemy off his feet, but actually push them back as much as 300 feet. It also has the ability to clear a small area of a battlefield, if Shinsuke is having trouble keeping contact with the enemy.

Not great, but not terrible. Also, I keep feeling like I've seen/heard this name somewhere before. Anyone know if it's from something, or am I just crazy?
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Old 2007-11-21, 16:40   Link #1040
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THis is one I will never forget

Name: Arthias Artemis
Nickname(s): The Falcon of Kohona, Omega Hokage, and The Forgotten Sannin
Age: 56 (Used Tsunade's jutsu)(PTS), 87(TS)
Sex: Male
Height: 6'6"
Weight: 199 lbs.
Rank: None(PTS), Kage(TS)
Affinity: Fire
Home: Traveler(PTS), Kohona(TS)
Age Of:
Academy Graduation: 8
Chunnin Selection: 9
Jounin Selection: 10
ANBU Selection: 14
Akatsuki Selection: 37
Kage Selection: 57

Story:

Long ago, Artemis was in a team of two only, Himself and Jesaru. His Older brother, Jesaru, always was friendly to him and his other brother, OROCHIMARU. Jesaru and Orochimaru were taught by the 1st, 2nd 3rd Hokage and a man named Uzumaki Hemushi. One day Artemis and Orochimaru's team had to fight each other. Artemis fought Jiraiya and Jesaru fought Orochimaru. Before the fight, Artemis was introduced to Tsunade. Artemis fell in love with Tsunade and beat Jiraiya to prove it. Jesaru beat Orochimaru and he was furious. At the Chunnin Exams for Jesaru and Orochimaru, Orochimaru to avenge to himself and seemingly killed Jesaru. After the explosion Artemis let open a mighty Jutsu called "Eye of the Falcon." The technique almost killed Orochimaru but he disappeared by the time Artemis almost unleashed his summoning. A month later Artemis left Kohona along with Jiraiya.

Years later, two figures came to Kohona, one was a little girl holding an Akatsuki's hand and calling him "Daddy." When Naruto and Tsunade heard that he was sent to find Tsunade, Naruto tried to protect Tsunade and tore his mask off revealing a figure reembling Shippuden Sasuke. Naruto was motion-less, Than all of a sudden, The akatsuki released a giant Falcon with a snake tounge. Before he was about to kill Naruto, Tsunade screamed, "ARTEMIS!" Artemis stopped. He turned to Tsunade, she noticed that part of skin around Artemi's eye was peeling, revealing that he had combined Tsunade's jutsu with Orochimaru's body stealing technique.

Years after living in Kohona and leaving Akatsuki, Artemis married Tsunade and became the 6th hokage. An epidemic had started, everyone was reseaving curse seals. Luckily, Arteis was able to seal them all. Orochimaru attacked Kohona again and this time Artemis used and ultimate technique, "Will of Fire" in which he created a huge ball of Fire the size of Kohona, transported himself and Orochimaru to a remote location and killed himself along with Orochimaru. Now forever on you can see the head of a flacon and 6 diffrent curse marks sealed.

Years after the 7th and 8th hokage, Artemis was reserected to become the Hokage again by the ANBU agents, the Village elders, and the 8th Hokage, his son Heru.

Jutsus:

Developed the power to build his chakra into sand like Gaara
Rarousharingan(His own Sharingan)
Eye of the Falcon
Will of Fire
Summoning: Heru the Falcon Death Bird
Double Rasengan
Double Lightning Blade/Chidori
Flying Thunder God
Water Style: Water Wave
Forest Style: Tree of Fire
Stone Style: Boulders of Infinity
Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bombs
6 Cursed Seal Activation(Bitten 6 times by Orochimaru in the fight after Jesaru's "Death")
Hemerage Rasengan
Jemi Chidori
Jonoo Butterfly
Killing Slit Blade


Akatsuki:


ANBU:
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