2020-08-16, 11:58 | Link #24 |
Yandere Otoko Ruki-tan
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: Earth 616
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Well, she got best punishment.
Until now, she'd keep wandering around and looking for demon to kill without able to control her body forever. Feel tormented by every injury she received as it won't heal yet she won't die.
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2020-10-17, 17:53 | Link #31 |
Senior Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
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The problem with crap like this is the MC didn't have to make any effort to get the power to take revenge. That seems to be a trend these days. The MC gets everything in a silver platter. Now, that can be fun if it's a comedy, but when the story takes itself this seriously, it would be much better to see the MC working to better himself and get stronger to achieve his revenge. That would make the revenge much more satisfying and sympathetic.
But well, at this point I already learned to not expect anything decent from LN/WN writers.
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betrayal, fantasy, harem, ntr, revenge |
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