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Originally Posted by dotdotslash
The first bit, where they are being a bit awkward isn't too bad. Once the actual sex starts, then yeah I found it a bit over the top; especially the notorious 'glug glug' ending. Also, to me it didn't really fit how the rest of the physics / physical interactions were described (not that there was a huge amount of detail to those).
Personally, I'd prefer to trade that story for a sentence or two in "morning dew girl", no need to be graphic, but something more than "they had been falling asleep everynight cuddling in each others arms".
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To hell with that, I want the two of them to have the most violent awe-inspiring sex the written word have ever witness. These two kids are too vanilla gotta start to learn how to spice things up at the rate they are going. (For those who don't know they go it a couple more times in 16.6 onwards.)