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Old 2006-01-02, 00:52   Link #15
Knightmare213
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Originally Posted by Fatty Chalupa
Unfortunately I decided to give up on mine. Its just that the Final Plus has completely screwed up everything I wrote. (That bastard Fukuda!)

Nice to see this thread back up again though. Writing is a good hobby!
So what if Final Plus screwed your story up? Series fan fictions do not have to follow what happens inside the series plot. Hell, your story gives some ideas for a third one. Here, let me post what I've said on the FanFiction.Net when I gave you a review.

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Originally Posted by Knightmare213 in FF.Net
Hey, it's me, Knighty from the AS Forums. You may not know me (hell, you don't, do you?) but I was interested to read your story that was mentioned by WarpObsecura and it has pretty good potentials to be a good story.

*clicks the Story Alert list*

Even though there are some grammar errors in each chapters, the action scenes are above average and can be fixed if you just think them out for a while.

I'd like to see how this goes. Keep on writing!
So please, even though you may not consider continuing it, you'll get some more reviews and readers as you gain reputation for your story.

Have fun writing!
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