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Originally Posted by Endrance
My first attempt for this month...Thinking about changing the text though
any c&c greatly appreciated
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I'll say a few things:
1) The signature is too big, and the focus is too small. If you cut off a bit from the top and/or bottom and get rid of the space on the right to make your focus off-center while moving the text somewhere else, then it would look better plus giving the picture a better quality. This is nothing technical, but something I though would be better from my perspective.
2) I love the animation around the text. I'm not sure how you will change the text, but definitely keep the animation. Maybe you could use a lighter font color to blend in with the sun rays.