Well, I didn't think I'd do it today, but Adediran convinced me to put some time in. So here it is, the Third Chapter of "The Devil's Offspring."
http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?s...ze=0&chapter=3
It's a bit longer than the other chapters, but I hope you enjoy it. Feel free to review it there, and give some feedback here...it would be greatly appreciated